im anxious to here the final version;
i feel this song has some potential! keep workin' at it! :D
im anxious to here the final version;
i feel this song has some potential! keep workin' at it! :D
Really wow thanks man :D i will try my best :3
Hmm?
I'm not exactly sure what you were trying to accomplish with this song... I can definitely see it playing in the background in some type of little iPod-based arcade game.
Or maybe the credits or title of a flash animation.
If that was your purpose than it was not too shabby :)
MHawks
In all honesty I still had a lot more that needed to be put on this song. But I just lost interest on it and working on it just became a pain.
Thanks for the review, though! Much appreciated.
I may have to favorite this;
This song calls for one of those slow, continuous head-bobs whilst tapping thy feet to the beat.
The song flows very well. I only wish it was longer with a slight variation somewhere :(
10/10
5/5
You sir, made a new friend :)
The girl who ask me to make this only wants to know if I could be able to make something beatiful with the sample she left to me. I prefer like a loop (I still have the files to expand it, too). But I only had (then) made variations in the bass (as you can hear).
Thanks for the feedback. I really appreciate it.
holy wow;
very catchy drum beat you have going there! i love the dark feel of the track... somewhat reminds me of a deathmatch tune that plays in unreal 3 or ut2k4 :)
just give it a little more work; the synths in the background are a bit blurred together. i can somewhat hear the tones they're bringing out and i feel if they're sharper it'd make the track a lot better :D
cheers!
Uh thank you very much, I am very pleased! Of course, I still work on track and I want to make a sequel!
Hmmm;
I'm not sure if I like the sound of the synths you have playing the main melody; however, I think it's incredibly catchy. My foot's tapping :D
It's just a wip, so that's the good news. It's a good piece so far, but please change that synth (the one that comes in at 00:29)
PS: The drums are freakin' tits.
Mhawks
Thanks! :D
If only....
it looped better. I thought the drums were perfect. They gave a cinematic feel to the song/loop, which I personally like. The synth that chimed in every so often added a nice touch.
It doesn't loop as well as I'd like, but otherwise very good :D
9/10
5/5
Thanks for the review :D Yeah.. looping sometimes worked, but I think they fixed it.
I'm not much of a house music kinda guy... but;
the song had my attention for about 4 of the 7 minutes of it. I noticed my foot tapping and my head bobbing as I was browsing the internets at one point.
Very well done sir, I approve of your skillz in the FL. I have it myself... and I'm still struggling with it, lol. Feel free to check out my armatureness :)
thehawks
LOL, thank you you are very good too, and yeah its pretty much loopy that way.
Loved this game... and loved this tune;
Where did you find the notes for this piece? I'd love to try and recreate their song as well..
Sorry dude I played this by ear but I'm sure there'd be lots of stuff on google, I'd definitely love to hear you do this song. Thanks for the review!
Daaa-uuuummm son!
Catchy as all hell. The beginning was a little weak, but it definitely got made up for. Great work!
I have to admit, yes, the beginning is weak. You might've noticed that the kick I used further in the song is also much more powerful than the one I used in the beginning. But still, thanks for the review, man!
My passion is writing music. Feel free to use any of my tracks - just shoot me a message with the final product.
Male
Student
Wisconsin
Joined on 12/6/09